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Diane Telgen Diane Telgen

Clean up your info-dumps!

World-building isn’t easy to do. You’ve got so many details to share about your characters and how their world works! So sometimes it happens: the dreaded info-dump.

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Amy Spalding Amy Spalding

Learning to Love Outlining

I’ve never been a writer who outlines. For anything! Not, of course, for the books I wrote, but not for school papers, not for professional essays, not for presentations or speeches.

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Danielle Sunshine Danielle Sunshine

Give the reader two plus two

The filmmaker Billy Wilder introduced the idea that you “give the audience two plus two, and let them add it up.”

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Lily Choi Lily Choi

Where Do Key Scenes Go?

“Inciting incident.” “Midpoint.” “All is lost.”

Maybe you’ve heard of these key scenes that must be in your novel, but do you know where they go?

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Emily Young Emily Young

5 Easy Ways to Improve Your Character Descriptions

Have you ever put [insert great description here] in your first draft, hoping that your Future Self will have a revelation? We've all been there. Here are five easy ways to improve your character descriptions.

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Denise Santomauro Denise Santomauro

Surviving Revision Hell

You wrote the first draft and now you realize it’s a hot, steaming mess. Welcome to Revision Hell.

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Diane Telgen Diane Telgen

What editors can (and can’t) do for you

The new year’s a time when the Angel Editors start getting an uptick in inquiries about our services. Which means it’s a good time to talk about what editors can do for you and your manuscript—and what we can’t.

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Jay Whistler Jay Whistler

You’re Doing It Wrong

One of the things I see in my editing on a near-daily basis is the incorrect use of the personal pronouns. I blame your middle school English teachers for this.

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Kate Angelella Kate Angelella

5 Lessons Writing in 2020 Taught Me

Whatever your experience, writing in 2020 was not like writing in any other year. Here are a few lessons I have learned from writing this year:

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Diane Telgen Diane Telgen

Using a Journal to Get Back to Writing

My schedule for revising the novel went out the window. I could have let my broken schedule get me down, but instead I let it go. I had a secret weapon giving me a boost: my daily drafting journal.

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Denise Santomauro Denise Santomauro

The Importance of Reading

In recent years, we have begun to understand on a deeper level the complexity of reading. Neuroscientists have conducted various studies to explore what is happening in our brain when we read. There are even whole books dedicated to this science. The reading done by writers, though, takes on a different kind of importance; it’s vital to a writer’s craft.

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David Fey David Fey

When The Finish Line Isn’t The End: Writer’s Edition.

…for every writer who dreams of pouring their stories onto the page, I say that NaNoWriMo should never be measured in terms like “success” or “failure.” Instead, regardless of where your goals landed, I’d argue the question we should all ask ourselves is “where do I go from here?”

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Diane Telgen Diane Telgen

Grammar Horror: The Dangling Modifier

If there’s one thing that scares me as a writer-editor, it’s the possibility of grammar errors creeping into my own prose. I’m the one who’s supposed to root out mistakes, but my first drafts can be as dashed-off and crappy as anyone else’s! There’s one tricky mistake in particular that gives me nightmares, because it’s so easy to overlook: the dangling modifier.

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